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Refactor docs so quick start instructions are for creating an AKS man… #5625
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To create a workload cluster, follow the [Cluster API Quick Start: Create your first workload cluster](https://cluster-api.sigs.k8s.io/user/quick-start.html) for detailed instructions. Ensure you select the "Azure" tabs for Azure-specific guidance. |
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Seems like we're repeating the same instructions from line 110 here?
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I think this one is highlighting a different part of the Quick Start (which I can appreciate-I am partial to overexplaining)
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Same instructions but different sections. So I did Cluster API Quick Start: <"section"> to point to what specific section of the Cluster API Quick Start documentation is relevant.
Let me know how this sounds, I was thinking of merging this information in one step but in between you need to annotate the capz-manager service account and that isn't in the Cluster API Quick Start docs since that is specific to workload identity.
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Since there's an in between step I wouldn't merge them for newer users. It's easier to follow that way.
Matt hit on a lot of the suggestions I had to offer. So outside of those, the only other thing I can suggest is adding potential error handling could be helpful. Otherwise, looks good to me! :) Thank you again for this! |
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Quickstart for users should be creating a managed cluster: an aks management cluster with workload identity.
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